my best oc and my first fanfiction finally in a new style!
ok i didn't finish the fanfiction but this is the story of the young "Vegeta", his master "Till", till's best friend "Amanthar" and the misterious "Vodars". this story start with Till who find the little vegeta and finish with the first part of "Dragonball Z".
in order from left: Vodars, Till, Young King Vegeta and Amanthar.
the first name of this fanfiction was Dragonball 1000 years ago, but now the new name is "Dragonball King Vegeta's empire".
No, i'm sorry the fanfic was created on a very old rpg i was the admin, something like five or more years ago... every user was a character from my fanfiction and he was had to do his role in the universe... but the little number of users and the work that made me too much busy for continue the moderating work, at least made me left the site with an unfinished story...
Btw the story, as if i remember in a right way, talked about the young King Vegeta and his friends (Amanthar..) that had to fight against his father "Legendary Vegeta, the first super saiyan" that became mad and started to destroy his own world. Till, the father of Bardack, start to be as a father for King Vegeta after they finally defeated Legendary Vegeta, and they start to found a new saiyan planet "Kamert".
After several years, King vegeta had two sons, Kaddish and Odion, two albyn saiyans that slowly start to act like "we are the pure saiyan, the others are bad and disgusting". their mother died in the childbirth and when King vegeta had our Vegeta as new son from another woman, they started a rebellion to put them on the throne, killing the baby and King Vegeta.
After defeating odion, Kaddish disappeared in the deep space on a spaceship waiting for the "Good times" for coming back and take his revenge, and King vegeta, decide to move his empire to a new bigger planet, the planet that will have his name, "Vegeta".
This was the background story, in a very general way, you know, the best part was discovering how the users's character could change this base story with their character. my favorite was "Amanthar, the fastest saiyan" (used by an unknown user) very proud but not so powerful... i think him and so many other character could make the story more deeper, with some new characters to love and follow to discover what they wanted to do and maybe.. how their story was finished. because this was the "Old Empire" story, so anybody of them will survive to the main story.
Sorry if my english isn't good... i wish that you could really understand what i wrote XD
you for got vegita's lil brother remember the move hes in or is he dead
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bardock "what u say" (bardock) this is kaikaiser or kaiser kai whats the difference lets gust get to know each other so hit me up some time sainthood
u should check out the comic i started you may like it
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A hero is someone who has given his or her life to something bigger than oneself.
A hero's strength is measured by the size of his heart, not of his power.
Btw the story, as if i remember in a right way, talked about the young King Vegeta and his friends (Amanthar..) that had to fight against his father "Legendary Vegeta, the first super saiyan" that became mad and started to destroy his own world. Till, the father of Bardack, start to be as a father for King Vegeta after they finally defeated Legendary Vegeta, and they start to found a new saiyan planet "Kamert".
After several years, King vegeta had two sons, Kaddish and Odion, two albyn saiyans that slowly start to act like "we are the pure saiyan, the others are bad and disgusting". their mother died in the childbirth and when King vegeta had our Vegeta as new son from another woman, they started a rebellion to put them on the throne, killing the baby and King Vegeta.
After defeating odion, Kaddish disappeared in the deep space on a spaceship waiting for the "Good times" for coming back and take his revenge, and King vegeta, decide to move his empire to a new bigger planet, the planet that will have his name, "Vegeta".
This was the background story, in a very general way, you know, the best part was discovering how the users's character could change this base story with their character.
my favorite was "Amanthar, the fastest saiyan" (used by an unknown user) very proud but not so powerful... i think him and so many other character could make the story more deeper, with some new characters to love and follow to discover what they wanted to do and maybe.. how their story was finished. because this was the "Old Empire" story, so anybody of them will survive to the main story.
Sorry if my english isn't good... i wish that you could really understand what i wrote XD
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A hero is someone who has given his or her life to something bigger than oneself.
A hero's strength is measured by the size of his heart, not of his power.
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bardock "what u say" (bardock) this is kaikaiser or kaiser kai whats the difference lets gust get to know each other so hit me up some time sainthood
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17 'nd Jamaican...